Jade Foolhea, Photography teacher. Surrey, England.
"I think the poster itself is very nice, well presented, however I would make the coat a darker grey, almost black. Just so its not all grey in the poster and it creates a bit of depth. The slogan also looks a bit out of place, so maybe try and incorporate somewhere."
I agree'd with the points made, so I made Aaron's coat a darker colour and decided to put the slogan in the strip going across the poster. Here is the finished poster:
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